I am in awe of what you did here with Liberty Ave...and the rain. I'm almost speechless. I need a minute to regroup.
~ahem~
Ok, aljsdf;a sfasdflkj;lkj, oh that didn't work.
~ahem~ *giggles*
I could hear them talking as I read...see them kissing in the dark, pressed against the hard wall of a building. So completely them.
Justin almost giggled when he felt Brian’s lips against his eyelids, his tongue swiping across his lashes, clearing them of the rain drops he’d felt gathering there. But his eyes opened at the contact and the expression on Brian’s face froze the laughter in his throat. Brian’s gaze was open and loving in a way that he only allowed when he was a little buzzed, but mostly just happy. Justin scanned Brian’s face intently and traced his smile with his fingers, wanting to memorize this look for the nights he went to bed alone.
This choked me up a bit...it's just amazing. And then you have Brian remember the moment in the ad. flajdsf;ljasf You are a genius, having them both on the same page with this memory.
Wonderful kiss in the rain and wrapped up with so much emotion and love.