unbroken_halo (unbroken_halo) wrote in pornicators, @ 2004-12-24 10:09:00 |
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Original poster: snapesdarkling
Title:Beginnings of Life
Author/Artist:Darkling
Kink(s):none really
Pairings: oh duh
Rating: Mature, not quire R
Challenge: The 'write something for your own damn comm, woman!' challenge
Disclaimer:All characters and rights owned by JKR, Warner Brothers, Shcolastic etc etc. I make no money from these fics. I pay people to read them. (Dear lawyers,that's a joke.)
Beta: stepmnstr
Note: Another one of my 'Barrack' style ficlets that just happened. I wanted to use dialogue only to see what could be done. Let me know how it reads.
“Potter, this is incredibly dangerous.”
“Why, are you going to explode?”
“You know why, or are you being intentionally dense? Stop that!”
“I’m only getting into your bed.”
“Precisely. Get out.”
“I’m cold.”
“Then go for a jog.”
“Too tired. Oh God, you are so warm.”
“Shhhhh. You will wake people. Shit! Remove your feet from my skin immediately or I will spell you into the lake.”
“You don’t mean that. Oi! Stop pushing, I’ll fall out.”
“Exactly.”
“Come on, Severus. Why is it so ‘incredibly dangerous’ anyway? Mmmm you smell nice.”
“Potter, I- Stop th-mm!”
“You taste nice too.”
“For the last time, get out of my bed. This is a barracks not a whorehouse.”
“You are raising your voice, Severus. People will hear.”
“It is dangerous, Potter, because if we start this, it makes us both increasingly vulne-”
“I don’t care. We’re here now. ”
“Well, excellent, superb, and brilliant; except, of course, for one tiny thing. You are placing my life at risk. Even if you care nothing for your own, spare a thought for the fact that I regularly undergo Legilimens at Eater meetings.”
“I’m sorry.”
“Right. Well, back to your own bed.”
“No.”
“Should I repeat the reasons why you should abandon your attempt to seduce me?”
“No, I think you should listen to the reason why you should let me.”
“I should, should I?”
“Yes.”
“Get on with it then. It’s daylight in two hours and just in case you had forgotten, we are on dawn patrol today.”
“I hadn’t forgotten.”
“What are you waiting for?”
“I want my life to start today.”
“What?”
“I want my life to start. I want to choose the life I lead instead of having choices forced on me. Do I die today? I don’t know, but if I do, I want to die knowing I had taken control of my life, had decided what I wanted and had acted on my own volition. Just once, you know.”
“I see. And just how long have you been considering this noble master plan?”
“Oh, since we started fighting together and not each other. I only decided to have sex with you last night though.”
“Two decisions in one lifetime. You astound me.”
“I’m serious.”
“I know; that’s what worries me.”
“I want to start my life and I want to start it with you.”
“How old are you, Potter?”
“Eighteen. Nineteen in eight weeks.”
“I am forty two.”
“I know. So?”
“Only someone who was eighteen and in lust would say that. It goes to prove my point that you are in no fit state to start anything to do with me.”
“You’re hard.”
“Don’t change the subject.”
“You want me, too.”
“Potter-“
“I’m not in lust either. Come on, Severus. We’ve slept together in the field. The only thing that stopped us there was the fear of you making too much noise.”
“Me making too much … Anyway, those circumstances and these are quite different.”
“Oh? How so?”
“It’s not four below freezing for one thing. We slept together for survival, remember?”
“I remember your cock poking me in the back. Mm, I love your neck.”
“Stop it! The noise factor applies here, too or had you forgotten we are sleeping on the floor amongst our fellow warriors?”
“They are not going to hex us to death though, are they?”
“I wouldn’t bet on it.”
“Kiss me.”
“No.”
“Please.”
“If I do, will you shut up?”
“Yes.”
“Mmmmm.”
“See? It’s nice isn’t it?”
“That is not the issue.”
“So you like kissing me?”
“Potter, you said you would shut up and go away.”
“I said I would shut up but I’m not going anywhere. God, you’re so hard.”
“Get your hands off- oh God, Potter!”
“Yes, Severus.”
“Ngh.”
“Pardon?”
“Fuck!”
“With great pleasure. Welcome to Day One, my love.”
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