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brushed_velvet (
brushed_velvet
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Re: Crossover: Batman Begins/Equilibrium - Preston/Ducard, sensory overload, self-denial, release, e
Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!
I could hear both of their voices so clearly; Ducard's calm, persuasive technique and Preston's quiet desperation. *flails*
A few details I love in particular:
as he encircles Preston’s shaft with a large hand
I don't know why, but just the simple description of Ducard's hand as large makes me melt.
“Come, John.”
Guh!
Ducard brings his hand to Preston’s mouth, brushing his fingers over the lips, painting them, pushing through the pillowy flesh.
“Now, taste,” he says.
Preston moans as his lips part
My brain is officially broek!!! Such a gorgeous image, one that will keep me warm in bed tonight, lol.
Thanks once again for taking the plunge and picking up this prompt. I love it! :D
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