Sometimes even reading about breathplay makes me nervous. And I didn't want anything to happen to these wonderful, angsty boys.
You definitely scared me for a moment, right along with Yohji, then I was relieved along with him. This line was especially powerful, given Yohji's past: He didn't strangle his lover in the throes of sex, even if he came close. I also really loved the opening sentence.
But the whole thing was great. Hot and also had me on the edge of my seat. Well described. And they are so in character.
Love it!
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