Oooooh. Remus totally gave me shivers here! I love frustrated!Severus. This is a fascinating world you've created here. I really like Remus' arrangement. And his biting Sev- whoa!
I LOVED Remus's conversation with Oliver, and Oliver's concern for him. I love that Oliver's still playing Quidditch, too. And mentioning Remus' son- that he was doing this so he and his son could stay in the wizarding world- VERY powerful indeed.