Severus sighed. "Do not give me the wounded puppy dog eyes, Lupin, old werewolves are not cute. I shall return if I can find the time." Bad cold&mean!Snape. That "old werewolves" comment HURTS! You did a great job of showing their relationship. I felt so sorry for Remus throughout the beginning (he deserves a whole lot more than what Snape is giving him)
What a delicious dream sequence. I love your word choices. Beautifully written.
And the end? Oooohhh it's sneaky!Snape! I didn't even think tea (I'm an idiot) I thought it was a spell or charm Sev left behind. But, um, tea makes a whole lot more sense :)
This was great!
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