Guh, that is so sexy and so beautiful. Couldn't stop reading for a second, didn't even blink, despite the presence of some of the characters I like least. Fantastic group scene!
btw, He comes with a strangled sob, his hands tightening around Alice's breaths... - I think you mean 'breasts', not 'breaths'.
And CONGRATULATIONS! You did it! Thanks for a month of lovely porny fic. I'm going to miss the daily porn. Thank you!