Oh... I feel so bad for Severus in this one. It's obvious he has it bad for Remus. I love how he's so desperate and needy, but still trying to stay in control.
And... GUH... you hit every single kink I have with the sex. I don't even have to go there. It's just... effin' awesome.
Good work on this part. Keep it up. (Even if you did almost give me a heart attack. I was looking for this half an hour ago. I was afraid it wasn't coming!!!)