You might have been nicer to Veronika than she deserved but you were spot-on to Deniz.
I love the description of him in his mother's dress and make-up, and he is adorable. Of course, you might have written Veronika as going into hysterics; you constructed your fic accordingly, didn't you? The atmopshere of foreboding could have led into a catastrophe or into laughter. And she couldn't help herself. Neither could I. *gg* It was adorable.
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miss_lovelace (miss_lovelace) wrote in no7_awz on August 8th, 2011 at 02:29 pm