Linda ([info]vitacrudelis) wrote in [info]no7_awz on December 17th, 2010 at 09:57 am
What a fabulous fic and DRAWINGS! <333 I love all the glimpses you've described. Telling the story by using her crush over the years explains so much about Isabelle that Show doesn't bother dealing with.

Isabelle was used to the interplay of touching. Handshakes and dry kisses on the cheek, the fond cupping of her chin when her Uncle Theo came to visit each Christmas. Brushing elbows with the boys in class and watching them fumble their pencil cases. She knew all about this. All the ways people brushed fingers passing dinner plates, and shoulders with the hired help. Etiquette. That's all it was. She knew every ritual down to her fingertips.

This paragraph's just perfect. And the drawing fits so well.

And the end! Gosh, Tom's just adorbs and gaaaah, Izzie. :CCC *cuddles forever*

Fantastic job, Mystery Author! <3
 
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