Marc's phone call: lol at that whole conversation, the speaker-phone incident, and wanker-Deniz.
“Tousle-haired and stubbly and looking delicious, Roman couldn't help noticing. He gave him a smile and ran a hand up his bare calf under the covers.” Guh!!!! More than any other thing I’ve read in this fic, I wish i’d been a fly on the wall for a sight of Deniz here. Guh, the image you’ve created in the space of SEVEN words *salivates*
“"I'm fairly sure we're about the same size." Only the faintest hint of mockery in his voice.” LOL, just LOL, so Marc.
I loved the tie-in of their pair-skating routine (from the gay games), almost a symbol of when they were at their strongest.
And last but not least, I adored the tickling and falling down on the ice scene, an almost-reproduction of ep 299 and their first(?) ever Eskimo kiss (yay!!) – a fitting ending indeed.
What I loved most about this was there were no loose ends; everything made sense and nothing required suspension of disbelief. It was a complete story, just a wonderful piece of work; every line was just perfect, every line just said SO much - you depicted every emotion, every action, every word, every occurrence, just perfectly, and gorgeously. I’m in awe.
(Apologia: If I have at all misinterpreted and/or taken away something completely different to what you were intending, my apologies; I’d hate to have missed the point on something this (lest I repeat myself yet again) amazing.
Also, I know this review rambles, and reads like a high school essay: discuss, analyse, back-up your analysis with quotes from the text - I guess I just got a little enthusiastic about it :).)
No7_AWZ - Post a comment