I had to wait for the right time to read this, Mystery Author, and I'm so glad I did, because this piece should not be rushed through. There are so many subtle little character details here that feel so natural that you might miss them in a quick read. I love how it begins at 3am, and Nina is still awake (or such a light sleeper) to notice; and how that slides so easily into the comforting feel of Vanessa's movement. It's like when you're used to someone sleeping beside you, and can't sleep well if they're not there -- it says so much about their relationship in such a simple, natural way.

I love Vanessa's POV too, and her coming to accept Nina's capriciousness, and trying to protect her from her crazy schedule. I love her drive to make Nina lose control, the playfulness of it (and even competitiveness) that fits their personalities so well.

But most of all, I love Nina's struggle against growing up, too, and Vanessa being the crux of that -- how those romantic notions are dispelled, yet it doesn't feel like they're any less connected (in fact they seem more so) because of it. You've really got a great insight into Nina's head, I think!

I'm just sorry it didn't go on longer! I am GREEDY, want more!!!!!!