05 October 2010 @ 11:21 pm
fan fic Maximilian pracising and thinking  
Title: Adjusting positions
Characters: Antonio, Maximilian,
Rating: harmless
Summary: Maximilian practising kendo and thinking about Antonio
Warnings/Spoilers: mentions child abuse, violence
Author's Notes: Influenced by another fic in which kendo is mentioned, by my own interest in martial arts and by the scene of those two practising together. I know nothing about kendo so I wikipediaed a few things and applied a few things from “my” martial arts.

It was also suppossed to be far longer but I can't make it sound right. Maybe I will write a new take on the same topic at a later point in time, but right now it has been sitting on my harddrive for to long and I would like to hear what others think. Should I just forget about it and go back to being an silent reader?


http://racing-tortoise.insanejournal.com/992.html?mode=reply