I really wish you were terrible at this I'd say it's perfect but you'd like that too much.
So the problem with it is that it's not my song that I asked you for.
But other than that, phenomenal. Seriously, Ben. You can go a little louder in the second verse, and try the word 'brig' with a flatter vowel, I think it'll sound even better. But without that, still. Amazing.