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Avoid if triggered by misplaced apostrophe's. ([info]essayel) wrote in [info]morningstar_mnr,
@ 2008-07-01 18:02:00

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Entry tags:chad, icene, memphis, sniper, travis

Outside The Cellar, 10.30, OTA
He had more or less decided to do another tonight. He had been out three times in the past week and had lain in wait for his chosen ones, but in each case they either hadn't shown or there had been too many people about.

Tonight he decided to try one of his vantage points down town and was walking to it through the evening dimness when he saw one of the ones he wanted walking ahead chatting animatedly to a much taller boy.

He clenched his teeth, hearing her laugh and paused to look in a shop window, though he actually kept an eye on his quarry. He had no quarrel with the youth, had no idea who he was, and there were a lot of people on the street, but all the same he fingered the gun in his pocket, imagining the kick of it in his hand, the look on her face.

The two halted, discussing something, then the boy turned and went down a flight of steps to a bar with her almost treading on his heels.

He sighed, seeing her out of reach, and left the window and strolled along towards the bar.

Suddenly he heard raised voices and she came shooting up the stairs, propelled by a bouncer, her face shocked. The man released her on the top step murmuring good advice then turned and went back down.

"You and your mother, asshole," she said and gave the bouncer the finger then sighed and took a couple of steps back along the almost empty sidewalk.

There was no time to be lost. He strode forward, hand clearing his pocket. Seeing the movement she looked up and he froze because she was smiling, a happy smile to see a familiar face and opening her mouth to speak.

The gun made a flat splatting sound and her jaw dropped then she staggered back and fell, but by then he was already darting through the traffic, running fast, heart pounding, but exultant for all that.



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[info]mm_phreak
2008-07-02 04:46 pm UTC (link)
He was sitting on the steps after the ambulance took her away. He'd wanted to go with them, but hadn't been permitted. They'd taken a cab here and he was waiting for Memphis to come through and rip him a new one for being out.

Chad found him sitting there, head in his hands, shoulders shaking. "You need somebody to check you out kid?" Then he looked down and realized who he was talking to. "Shit. Your brother is coming to get you."

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[info]mm_phreak
2008-07-02 04:49 pm UTC (link)
Travis looked up, Kennard blurred. "They wouldn't let me go with her. It's my fault and I couldn't go with her. We wouldn't be here if I hadn't suggested... Now my brother's gonna kill me for sneaking out." Angrily he pounded his fists on the steps. The concrete didn't give, just thudded.

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[info]mm_phreak
2008-07-02 04:52 pm UTC (link)
Chad new that feeling all to well. He laid a hand on the boy's shoulder. "I'll see what I can find out for you on her." He'd take a step in and try to talk to the brother, see if Travis really was in danger. "But we need to get a statement from you too. Did you see who did this or where they could have been standing?"

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[info]mm_phreak
2008-07-02 04:55 pm UTC (link)
Travis rubbed his knuckles. "She turned." He pointed to the right. "That way, and smiled. Like she saw somebody she knew. But I didn't see anybody."

He hadn't seen anybody because he'd been a coward and fallen to the steps. "I ducked when I heard the shot fire. I can't help you." His hands hit the concrete again, harder.

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[info]mm_phreak
2008-07-02 04:57 pm UTC (link)
Chad noted what he'd said. "You've helped me out on where to look and maybe on a who to look for. I'm going to see if I can get you any information on her condition."

He stood and strode off, sending a paramedic over to check him out for shock. And so he'd quit hitting the concrete.

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