OK, I know it's been rough. Your mom died, you just found out your husband was planning on leaving you before the auto accident that killed him. Yeah, and those videos of his sex tour of Hong Kong were hard to stomach. I'm sure it doesn't help that you've been turned into a vampire, but you need to lighten up a bit. You're taking yourself way too seriously.
Dear Ryan,
Loosen up a little, please. Don't let Sandy kill your fun side. She needs to learn to laugh at herself.
Dear Joe,
Your dialogue is a kick to write. I need to put you in more scenes.
Dear LaKeesha,
You need to bring in more of yourself. So far you don't have a lot of depth other than being there to get on Ryan's case.
Dear Mark,
You're supposed to be a super stud. Make your move already. Ryan's going to have Sandy's affections all tied up before you get around to making a play for her.
Dear Moffet,
Be patient. You and your band of mercenaries will get their chance. I've still got a lot of groundwork to lay before then.