deird1: Making The Talking Sound Like Talking - I’ve read a whole bunch of meta on writing, and nearly all of it mentions that you should make your dialogue sound more natural by “adding in umm’s and oh’s and stuff like that”. -
stewardess: Fandom: Blogging Bag Ladies - To SUP, LiveJournal USA is the flagship department store in a slowly decaying downtown. And fandom is the bag lady sleeping in the entry way. -