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The Porn Santa ([info]smutmas_mod) wrote in [info]merry_smutmas,
@ 2007-12-21 16:00:00

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Entry tags:art, severus/draco

Merry Smutmas, [info]femmequixotic!

To: [info]femmequixotic
From: [info]sherant



Title: A Snaco Vignette
Rating: R+
Pairing: Snape/Draco
Disclaimer: I just draw what my brain tells me to...
Summary: Post-HP6 perhaps, or Post-war AU. What would you do to a brat who smokes up all your best tobacco while you're out gathering supplies?
Warnings: Bare torso, fellatio, lots of rain, a hint of voyeurism -oh, and smoking. Image is NOT WORKSAFE.
Artist's notes: After I signed up for this wonderful fest I read through other people's posts to get an idea of what I could look forward to (and ideas for things I should have requested!). When I came across Femmequixotic's prompt of smoking I thought, "oooooh, that's cool, I should've done that! Hmm, maybe I'll do it anyway." So imagine my IMMENSE surprise and delight when I learned she was my gift recipient!

Anyway, the ideas (and her other prompts) really got my brain into overdrive. I really, really wish I could've asked someone to write a drabble to go along with this, since it turned out kind of rambly and short since I had to stop before it turned into a huge (but wonderful) project, LOL. But I really hope you like it, Femmequixotic, your prompts were a blast to work with, and I apologize again for the rather abrupt ending (and the proportionately small amount of actual smut)!








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[info]the_con_cept
2007-12-21 09:07 pm UTC (link)
Augh! The last panel killed me dead! So clever and lovely and wonderfully done! I adore the way the smoke travels across the panels, and I love Draco's hair and how it goes from black and white to gaining color with Draco's blush...absolutely splendid!

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[info]meri_oddities
2007-12-21 09:12 pm UTC (link)
Oh, my that was just lovely. The emotions seemed to flow out of it. And I absolutely loved the last frame. That just killed me dead. *g*

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[info]snegurochka_lee
2007-12-21 09:15 pm UTC (link)
Oh, fabulous!! I love how Snape alternates between annoyed parental figure, and Goddamn I want that brat's dick in my mouth. a;slkdjglsaj. The panel with Draco pulling his shirt off just killed me. :)

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adkafksdkgdgh - [info]lilian_cho, 2007-12-21 11:33 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]nishizono, 2007-12-22 01:20 am UTC

[info]psyfic
2007-12-21 09:16 pm UTC (link)
Hee! If I were Draco I'd order them and put them on Potter's account. :) Lovely work!
Brava! clapping

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[info]bethbethbeth
2007-12-21 09:24 pm UTC (link)
I love this - especially the way the panels get brighter and warmer and more colorful as the 'story' moves forward. And that last panel? Fantastic!

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[info]allifer
2007-12-21 09:25 pm UTC (link)
AHAHA poor Harry! I bet he wants in on the action!!

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[info]anyluck
2007-12-21 09:28 pm UTC (link)
Wonderful and hilarious (oh, Hedwig looks so disgruntled!). Love the rain, the smoke, the way you used colour. It's amazing and just... lovely!

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[info]tenshinochouwa
2007-12-21 09:44 pm UTC (link)
Love the slow insertion of colour, and of course the last frame was priceless.

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[info]accioslash
2007-12-21 09:52 pm UTC (link)
Best. last. panel. EVAH. *smirk*.

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[info]midnitemarauder
2007-12-21 09:59 pm UTC (link)
Hahahahahahaha! And Hedwig! *wibbles*

I have to say that at first I was reading it right to left - TOO MUCH MANGA! :-P

This is beautiful and love how you introduce the colour! This is really lovely, and you don't need words - it's a wonderful story all on its own!

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[info]secretsolitaire
2007-12-21 10:12 pm UTC (link)
Oh, that's just gorgeous! I love the panel where it looks like Snape is whispering into Draco's ear -- so intimate.

The introduction of color works beautifully, warming everything up. Also, dude! There's plenty of smut here! *licks*

And of course I tee-hee'd at the last panel. :-D Lovely work, mystery artist!

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[info]sdk
2007-12-21 10:15 pm UTC (link)
Oh so funny!!! That last frame--I burst out laughing.

But overall too, I loved this! I love the way you use the smoke throughout and the color that grows as things heat up between Snape and Draco, and I keep staring at Draco's face right after Snape takes away the cigarette--that sheepish but unrepentant expression--it's so perfect.

And then Hedwig in the end! You can tell she's like, Really Harry? I really have to deliver this?? Brilliant!

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[info]iheartbowie
2007-12-21 10:15 pm UTC (link)
This was absolutely perfect! I love how beautiful Draco was with just the cigarette and then the passion. WOAH! I love that Severus was striking and not...well...too Severus I guess is the way to put it. He was very Rawr and nummy too. *_*

And I'll have to agree with the notion that Harry wanted in. Why else do you complain? You were obviously looking. XD

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[info]laboratories
2007-12-21 10:23 pm UTC (link)
Lovely use of color, yes, but I also am awed by how you seem to use grey as a base and put white highlights on it. Good job on the backgrounds, too. Not too much stuff to distract from the action *ahem*, but enough to show the setting and atmosphere. It's so nice to see where it all takes place instead of just having characters on white :)
The last panel had me laughing out loud, Hedwig's look is priceless!
You did such a great job on this, I love the whole thing even though that's not exactly my favorite pairing. ;)

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[info]rickey_a
2007-12-21 10:32 pm UTC (link)
oh my, poignant, hot & sexy and I loved the punch line at the end. Great stuff.

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[info]florahart
2007-12-21 10:39 pm UTC (link)
OH MY GOD last panel. *DED*

I love the house as he approaches, the *swipe*, Draco's belly and shirt coming off, the way color comes in, and, you know, Hedwig. :D

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[info]ex_shaggy203
2007-12-21 10:41 pm UTC (link)
LULZ. Awesome. <333

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[info]maple_mahogany
2007-12-21 10:44 pm UTC (link)
That was so pretty! Draco's expressions captured so much emotion and thought. I thought the cropped/vague images of Snape were a real good way to show his shady character.

Get Drapes - ahahahahahah!!! lol - wonderful!

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[info]moshesque
2007-12-21 10:44 pm UTC (link)
Aha, this is so very awesome. Gorgeous build up, sweet, understated smut, and that last panel - that has slain me. *gg* Wonderful stuff!

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OMG! What a hoot!
[info]josan
2007-12-21 10:49 pm UTC (link)
LOL! That punchline is purely wicked! LOL!

(The artwork is erotic...but the one I like best is Severus whispering into Draco's ear. There's something about the hand and Snape's mouth that made me go back to that one several times.)

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[info]stellamoon
2007-12-21 10:50 pm UTC (link)
Hot!! And with a sense of humor, too! I loved it. And I really liked how it got warmer with color as it progressed. That was a nice touch. Great job!

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[info]parlophone
2007-12-21 10:53 pm UTC (link)
LOL
*laughs like a drain*

Beautiful vignette, full of atmosphere, er, mystery artist!
I could almost smell the tobacco, hear the rain (and the subsequent panting!)
Your Severus is so gorgeous.

So HP lives right across the road, does he? Lucky him :)

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[info]avialle
2007-12-21 11:16 pm UTC (link)
OMG!!! X^DDDDD *squees!!!*

LOVES YOUS FOREVERS!

Well, I love everything but the cigarettes . . . :^P

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[info]silverhielm
2007-12-21 11:21 pm UTC (link)
Ohhh, so sweet and funny. The last panel killed me XD but I also loved exclamationmark!Draco and the scene in which Snape's licking his neck. The droplet or perspiration is so hot *fans self*

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(no subject) - [info]silverhielm, 2007-12-21 11:22 pm UTC

[info]tiger_iris
2007-12-21 11:27 pm UTC (link)
Fantastic! Draco is gorgeous, and I love everything: the smoke, the rain, the colours -OMG Draco's hair and blush!

And in a few panels you succeeded in telling us a whole story: there's a real complicity between Draco and Snape, and I love to imagine Potter in the background!

Well done!

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