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Tweak says, "kthnxbai"

MarinaNova Mods (marinanova_mod) wrote in marinanova_ooc,
@ 2012-09-01 10:50:00

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mod: hmd, mod: plotting

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bluemoondog
2012-09-03 08:44 pm UTC (link)

I have one thing to say and, babe, I just need more of you and your muses all around.

I enjoy how the first thread with Eric and Helix has gone, their snark war ended with them joking around and that's pretty great. I like that Eric is still kind of being a jerk to Helix, but the blue kid appreciates the humor and attitude so much it actually amuses him more than anything. I think it kind of fell more into a playful bullying and that doesn't happen often. They're both dicks and I think because of that they kind of get each other and commiserate and can almost poke fun at everything else and have their own little joke or language. At least, I hope that's how this may develop in the future. They can definitely both have a laugh at humans, because even in his world they are everywhere and kind of dumb at times.

I can clearly hear his voice too, so I definitely think you're doing a great job with him! I also think, because he's taken from late Season 4, after everything with Sookie and with losing himself, I think he does seem to be somewhat less of a dick by then. Granted, he's still Eric so he won't lose that coldness, but you have more leeway with him acting almost more human. So thus far, I think you've been balancing that out just right, at least from what I've seen.

Rogue and Helix, maybe Aidan too! Somehow or another they need to have a movie night again, or she can take him ice-skating or something random he's probably never done so they can laugh and have a good time. Definitely more hang out times. I haven't seen the movie in forever, and honestly I should see it again, but from what I recall she definitely seems like the Rogue I know. I just love the sweet way the two are to each other. Helix needs more almost!siblings in his life.

And Buffy, she's fun, as the Buffster is. I sadly haven't had Helix interact with her much, but if the blue kid doesn't jam with her again, maybe Sam will get to be friends! All in all, when I do read her posts or what not, I hear her voice pretty clear. So keep up the good work!

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vikingly
2012-09-04 02:27 am UTC (link)

/twirls you around. Considering all of these lovely things you've just said:

Also, yes movie night and more Helix + Rogue + Aidan too would be very welcome. I'm looking forward to more Helix + Eric stuff. And yes, that's one reason I did bring him from that point. He's still a dick but he's a bit less of a dick (and Sookie has a lot of control over him at this point which helps a good deal). Eric is slowly learning to get in touch with his humanity, and that includes being nice to people. Eventually I'm going to canon update him to the end of S5 because he learned a LOT about being more 'human' in this season. ANYWAY I'll stop rambling but thank you yes.

I'm good with Buffy and Helix hanging but I def want her and Sam to be friends 'cause I think they could be awesome.

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