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Tweak says, "The Gin? You're drinking Gin?"

MarinaNova Mods (marinanova_mod) wrote in marinanova_ooc,
@ 2012-09-01 10:50:00

Entry tags:

mod: hmd, mod: plotting

Game-wide HMD/Plotting!
Welcome to the MarinaNova HMD! This is optional, but encouraged.

• List your characters for which you'd like feedback. We have a form below if you like forms!
[Feel free to add 4th Wall characters]

• Leave your tactful and considered thoughts, questions, concerns, praise, suggestions, etc. for others.

We strongly encourage you to make this a dialogue. Find out what went into actions, decisions, and characterization and you may come to understand it better. Hopefully you'll also be in the best position to clearly communicate your own concerns. Results will be more satisfactory for everyone if one person isn't on the offensive while the other is on the defensive.

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Don't gang up on someone. You may have a different way of wording something, but unless you have something new to contribute, consider letting it go if there are already others saying it.

Be constructive and considerate.

• Since there is no plotting meme during months with an HMD, please feel free to do that here too.

• Contact a mod if you have any problems.

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bluemoondog
2012-09-03 06:12 pm UTC (link)

I'm pretty useless for crit here but I really enjoy your muses. I loved Sasha from the beginning, how she was the first to really be kind and giving to Helix. I'd love to see them interact again now that the boy has changed and adjusted a little more to living in Marina.

Kohran is quirky and loveable and she's fantastic. I like that she and Aidan have kind of ganged up on getting Helix involved in theater too.

Then you have Reki, and though they only talked that once, I like how she's kind of laid back and sort of contrasting the other two ladies in your line-up.

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goddessofwar
2012-09-04 06:19 am UTC (link)

/holds Bren and Helix!

I'm doing my best to catch up or at least touch base with Sasha's CR (she has an unfortunate open post for this dayweek!) as I slowly (but surely) get out of my failzone since my long hiatus. I so enjoy bouncing my kids off of Helix so I'll make sure to toss them his way the next chance that comes up!

I'm thinking Kohran probably pisses Helix off with her chipper. It's only a matter of time 'til Helix performs in public AND HE WILL LIKE IT. >D

If Helix wants someone who's chill and keeps her concern to herself, just call on Reki~!

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