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MarinaNova Mods (marinanova_mod) wrote in marinanova_ooc,
@ 2012-09-01 10:50:00

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shatteredblade
2012-09-01 11:00 pm UTC (link)

Player name: Yaywon

Character: Road Kamelot | D. Gray-man |

impaledcandles | ☑
Stiles Stilinski | Teen Wolf |

alwaysrobin | ☑
Naoto Fuyumine | DOGS: Bullets&Carnage |

shatteredblade | ☑
Cyril | Todd Allison and the Petunia Violet |

recordkill | ☑

Link to private HMD if preferred: here's good! everyone has hmd posts on their journals though if you'd like to tag there instead.
Comments: I haven't been very active with most of my chars thanks to burnout and school, but I'm welcome to any plots or ideas or crit you want to bounce by me. I feel the shakiest with Stiles out of all everyone, with Cyril/Road a close second. I feel like I don't make him...wordy enough? IDK. Anyone who's seen his canon who'd like to mention a few things would be most appreciated! I also feel like I'm being weird with Road too. Is she creepy enough? Too domestic? Too nice??

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	shatteredblade 2012-09-01 11:02 pm UTC (link)
	OH and also my fourth wall chars were: Cassandra Cain \| DC \| wordsofabat Natasha Romanov \| Marvel-movie verse \| redspider I think that was it. feel free to crit them too! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	matter 2012-09-02 12:06 am UTC (link)
	stiles. __ i love your stiles. to be honest, your stiles was the last little nudge i needed to start watching teen wolf and i do not regret itttt. i think he's just wordy enough! i keep meaning to throw elena at him! (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	shatteredblade 2012-09-02 02:43 am UTC (link)
	kaljfads /HOLDS. I'm so glad that you like him!! AND that you've watched Teen Wolf /sits here and watches your Allison journal.....:))) and yes, I need Elena CR again now that Sakura's gone. Stiles and Elena can bond over being normal and having supernatural friends. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	matter 2012-09-02 02:50 am UTC (link)
	he's brilliant! lasjdg allison. /looks at her journal toooo. one day. soon. c: yes please! elena can tell him damon's a jackass and he's not worth the attention. yes, i stalked that thread that one time. i nearly threadjacked with elena to tell stiles that damon is... a jackass actually lmfao but i didn't want to intrude on new cr. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	alwaysrobin 2012-09-06 03:29 pm UTC (link)
	SOON. LMAO she should totally tell Stiles that. if he finds out that they're together though he'll be like WHY DO ALL THE NICE GIRLS GO FOR THE JERKS /wrings hands (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

matter
2012-09-06 04:57 pm UTC (link)

LMFAO she so totally will eventually. It's kind of her thing. "Damon's a jackass." and LOL it's okay Stiles. /pets him. It's not like Lydia is the sweetest person on earth, and neither is Elena. She's not with Damon because he's a jerk, she's with him because he's her friend, and he just happens to also be a jerk to whom she's also a friend. /suddenly types out a response to this not on level with amusing flippancy i'm sorry /changes the tone in a socially awkward way always

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	alwaysrobin 2012-09-06 07:44 pm UTC (link)
	HAHA now I want that to be an actual IC conversation where Elena patiently explains to Stiles that Damon has a cuddly heart somewhere underneath that jerky exterior. also she needs to give him advice on Lydia!!! (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	matter 2012-09-06 09:42 pm UTC (link)
	SHE WILL AND THIS GAME NEEDS A LYDIA BTW. lmfao yep. explaining Damon has a cuddly heart. "One time he hugged me." Proof, I tell ya. And she'll make this face ^ while she says it. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	cheerleader 2012-09-03 07:07 pm UTC (link)
	i'm one of those rare people who could not get into teen wolf, despite trying to watch the series, but i love your stiles regardless. he's such a fun character and even though i'm largely canonblind, i really enjoy tagging with him and following his interactions in the game. ♥ (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	alwaysrobin 2012-09-06 03:28 pm UTC (link)
	thank you!!! <333 I'm so glad to know that you like him because I really like tagging Quinn and Angel with Stiles. He likes Quinn since she's nice and not a popular-rawr-queen bee type of girl!!! ANGEL...is okay too...FOR A VAMPIRE... He has all the questions for him. (Reply to this) (Parent)

bluemoondog
2012-09-04 03:14 am UTC (link)

You know I love you lots. I feel like Helix and Road should talk again or interact more and I'm really liking Cyril so far. I enjoyed all the threads I had with you and Naoto while Haine was still in the game. I'm sorry we didn't get to have more canonmate bondy times. I hope to see her stick around and maybe I can make the CR up to you with one of my other Dog-themed (Sort of?) boys? (assuming Sam gets in)

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	alwaysrobin 2012-09-06 03:32 pm UTC (link)
	/HOLDS!!! Yeees, Road likes Helix since he didn't go all "HOW COULD YOU" during the Cross-on-a-cross thing so she'll definitely talk ~~bother~~ him!! Cyril thinks he's cool too. I will ALWAYS miss our Naoto and Heine CR ;; I need to make up for it by tagging Helix with Naoto again and SAM!!! I love Sam! He's so scruffy and adorable. (Reply to this) (Parent)

kitty_has_claws
2012-09-04 08:18 pm UTC (link)

I don't know Stiles (unless you count the old movie. heh) so I can't help you, my Yaywon! But I'm sure everything is wonderful because your characters always are. /all the faith. (Is that clever since you've played Faith too?)

Anyway, I need more of you. Especially Road...and Naoto. I have a feeling I might really like her if I knew anything about her. I think your Road is great always. She is creepy, domestic, and nice in the correct amounts. Stir well and bake at 350 degrees.

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	alwaysrobin 2012-09-06 03:34 pm UTC (link)
	HAUNT IS ALWAYS CLEVER <3 ahhh I'm happy that you think she's great ;; I need to tag Euphie again with Road!! And Kitty of course, now that she's not dating Tyki Road will be less of a horrible person to her....really! Also, Naoto and Kitty need to bond!! I SHOULD ENABLE YOU TO READ HER CANON. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	kitty_has_claws 2012-09-07 05:43 pm UTC (link)
	<333 That will be hard, but I like the idea of Naoto and Kitty bonding! <3 But yes, ALL THESE THINGS! (Reply to this) (Parent)

thisiscalm
2012-09-06 12:39 am UTC (link)

yaywoooon

I'm going to give you some, uh... backwards praise? In regards to Cyril — as you know, I had to read his canon because none of us knew it at all and I just want you to know that as I read his scenes out, I kept coming back to your app. So rather than saying that you play him straight from the comic, the comic played him straight from you which essentially ends up as the same sort of deal but yes. Good. I've yet to tag him but I can honestly say that I think you're doing a beautiful job with him so far.

Road also seems really right to me from what I can remember from DGM — you have a good balance between sweet and creepy that I really enjoy playing against and I'm really looking forward to seeing what will happen between her and both Aidan and Reid.

You also make me want to watch Teen Wolf. Damn it.

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alwaysrobin
2012-09-06 07:42 pm UTC (link)

you know you want to watch teen wolf :)) HAVE MY CANONS FAILED YOU BEFORE??

ahhh THANK YOU RICA! I'm so glad to know that you like him especially since you know the canon (BECAUSE OF MEEE). clearly you need to tag him with your beautiful characters right now. Also it's a big relief to know that Road's IC. She still needs to meet Reid and give him more evidence on the noaharecreepyandviolent theory!!

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