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Tweak says, "billy martin is no gangsta"

MarinaNova Mods (marinanova_mod) wrote in marinanova_ooc,
@ 2012-09-01 10:50:00

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mod: hmd, mod: plotting

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caligulasaqua
2012-09-01 09:04 pm UTC (link)

Player name: Jac

Character: Eridan Ampora | Homestuck |

caligulasaqua | ♒
Comments: Still from very early on in the canon, as he's from right as he entered the game -- Except, he has knowledge of what he does and how he dies, he just doesn't like to talk about it as it upsets him. Another note is that with Ciaphas Cain as his moirail, with Cain being probably the only human able to deal with Eridan's... Well, personality, for longer than a few minutes, he's not as awful as he is in canon. So, there's that. Everything else about him should be fine but let me know if there is anything I should rethink. Also, I usually keep it on the down low but he's definitely still genocidal towards lower bloods. Humans, especially, he just doesn't talk about it as much in case his moirail is listening in.

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	bluemoondog 2012-09-04 12:20 am UTC (link)
	I needs me more Eridan. For as short and sweet as our interactions have been, I liked them. I think, from what I've seen, Eridan definitely sounds like Eridan all around. I'd love to see more ♥ (Reply to this) (Parent)

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