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Tweak says, "Wag the dog"

MarinaNova Mods (marinanova_mod) wrote in marinanova_ooc,
@ 2014-01-01 13:41:00

Entry tags:

mod: hmd, mod: plotting

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blue_eyed
2014-01-01 08:24 pm UTC (link)

Player name: katana

Character: piter de vries | dune (novel) |

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Comments: i know that not a lot of people are familiar with dune or piter, but i'm always excited about crit! even if you aren't at all familiar with him or his canon, please let me know about questions/concerns/input whenever they might come up. lately, i've been feeling kind of stilted with him and worried that he isn't quite sinister or calculating enough.

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hastohappen
2014-01-02 03:58 am UTC (link)

As I said on plurk, I am absolutely up for some tense cat and mouse type banter with these guys. Might help with the sinister and calculating angle?

Though I will say that, while I'm not super familiar with Dune other than having seen the movie ages ago which is not exactly helpful, I absolutely love the way that you write Piter. I know canonblind crit only goes so far, but I love how much thought goes into your tags for him and I am always delighted to be able to play with you.

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