Harry took Severus’s hand then gently put it to his lips, giving it a long tender kiss
SWEEEEEEEEEEET! *is making ridiculous happy noises*
Severus took the longest to undress;
;_; He's an idiot. Probably thinks he's not attractive enough and so is taking his time with the 'inevitable,' or whatever he tells himself. (I like nothing more than Harry undressing Severus and kissing every inch of his skin as it is revealed. 1) It gets Snape HOT 2) Drives Snape's insecurity away 3) Serves as proof that Harry's not in it for just sex... even though, when asked, he only mentions that the sex was brilliant.)
He moved behind Severus sweeping the dark hair away from the man’s neck. He began to kiss and lick the smooth, pale skin.
I must say it is quite an experience to try to imagine a sauna when sitting in a room so freezing you find it hard to type. :3
“NO!” Severus said fighting against the younger man.
*eyes go wide in fear* O_O Why is Severus fighting this? *is afraid for Severus*
Harry stayed close to Severus’s field of vision as if to remind his lover of his consent.
Poor Severus... would have been so much better if he wanted to from the start. But things don't come easy for him, do they? :(
Severus began to feel the need to come
I think something is missing - a small black dot at the end, perhaps?^^
Severus challenged, “Remus I want it, all of it!”
*sings* I can see clearly now, the rain has gone.... (Consensuality is SUCH a turn-on!) Bonus points for Remus being 'huge.' Just don't push it - Severus IS bigger, right? =) *wants nothing more than to pull a Voldemort and compare wand lengths*
The gasp that was emitted caused Severus to clench his muscles
Hidden Snarry = Love! *grins widely*
rolled Severus onto his side so the man was facing Harry.
Love! Same reason as above! (nevermind the rhyme -_-) Severus is enjoying the view, isn't he? ;)
“Sirius,” he said, a bit quietly. Remus laughed a loudly.
I have a feeling Harry said this b/c he saw someone else's INITIAL reaction to being dominated (am I right?) and chose someone who wouldn't mind so much...
so as to expose himself to Severus.
ROFLMAO :D
“GOD! HARRY!” Severus cried as he came, every ounce of him shivering with fulfillment.
I like how there are two other people in the room, but he screams out SOMEONE ELSE'S NAME! (Should I tell you that I LOVE the name on Severus's lips?^^)
“You’ve made sure each of has come,
Me playing beta again. made sure each of US has come.
God, Jesus, Allah, Zeus, Merlin.
LOLZ Which one of these is not like the other? =)
Their bodies spent they lay limbs relaxed in the steamy room.
Their bodies spent, they lay, limbs relaxed in the steamy room. (add commas)
“I already sent him some manuals,” Severus replied with a flash in his eyes. “Though I doubt it will be of much help as I question his ability to process what he reads.”
To think, I didn't even realize that I made one icon specifically for what Snape says about Ron here.
Sirius said head shooting up.
Sirius said, head shooting up. (comma)
to go the Leaky Cauldron?”
to go TO the
“Since when have I liked my family?” Sirius said back.
I just like hearing Sirius say that. Idk why.
“Severus, join me for a drink?” Harry said brushing his hand against Severus’s.
“I must be back in time for dinner-"
*pouts*
Severus then stopped short before he disappeared
“My office, Potter, tonight!”
*grinning and dancing* *waves fist into the air and pulls it down forcefully* YEEEEEEEEEES!
Headmasterly sektss. Gives "yes, Master" a whole new meaning, ne c'est pas? =)
(And here I thought Snarry didn't get hotter than detentionfic...)
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