"I mean more of a noticeable shape. I like the idea of the feathers outlining it, but It seems just slightly too abstract. The lettering style is fine to me. I like the sort of soft spoken subtlety to it.
"So I think that we have gotten the basic idea down. When do you think you'll be able to get this thing on me?" He asked. The sooner he got it done, the better he would feel. He wouldn't have to wake up shaking and pleading with his memories, telling them he had done all he could. He thought that that tattoo would also give him something extra, something that separated him from the bunch of hired hands he usually had to socialize with.