In addition to the usual spelling and grammar things I am constantly critiquing myself on, it's been brought to my attention that activity with my characters needs some work as well >>;;;;;; I've worked hard in the last few weeks to rectify these issues along with previous concerns and suggestions in other HMD posts. But as always, I am completely open to fixing any mistakes I'm making and to better myself, so feedback is greatly appreciated (especially with Steve since he's newer and I'm still concerned about his voice at times ^^;;; ).