Tight, and yet still quite lyrical. This short piece is a poster-child for the beauty that can result not from excessive, flowery prose, but from a lovely economy of words where each and every one counts.
*bows* Thank you! I love squeezing the words till they squeak. ^______^
Gorgeous, simply gorgeous. I adore this one.
I'm trying to recall, didn't you say you were interested in learning about the Weiss Kreuz fandom? This fic is kind of typical of my take on those two characters. ^_^