The imagery of everything in this story is breathtaking. The senses are so pungent. I'm a sucker for the senses and you know I love it when you utilize them so thoroughly within a work.
Touch with as though caressing the most delicate of rice paper
Taste with Sea-salt? Linen? Leather? and then the part where the palm is licked.
Hearing with noise not enough to escape my throat .
Sight - the entire sequence of the sleeper and the watcher.
Smell with I breathed in the scent of him until I was drunk on it.
All combining together with the spinning hope that someday he might just wake up and catch me.