But I really liked this; it's awesome and I can't believe that I missed the potential of the spell (never actually using it in the game probably helped) for fic like this, but dude. Vossler is so different from my own, yet perfect here. I really like this.
The narration reads like you knew exactly what you wanted to do with it and wrote on with impunity; that each word is there because it fits together tightly, has the right weight in the sentence, and that is perhaps the best part of the whole thing for me, the one that really catches my eye about a piece.
I hope you wouldn't mind terribly if I friended you so that I might keep my eye out for your other fic?