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Laylah ([info]laylah) wrote in [info]kinkfest,
@ 2007-09-02 08:00:00

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Entry tags:a: laylah, f: ulster cycle, p: cu chulainn/ferdiad, september 02

"Favor," Ulster Cycle (Cu Chulainn/Ferdiad)
Title: Favor
Author: Laylah
Fandom: Ulster Cycle (Irish mythology)
Pairing: Cu Chulainn/Ferdiad
Rating: PG-13 for teenage foster-brother UST.
Word count: 585
Prompt: body-painting - in the dark hours before the dawn, on the morn of battle


Ferdiad mac Daire woke in the dark hours before the dawn, on the morn of battle: the fire had cooled to red embers in the hearth, but it was not the chill that woke him, for his blood brother slept at his side, warm beneath their furs. Rather it was the thrill of battle-joy that bade him rise, and cast away his sleeping furs to sit up, and seek light from the window to the east. Naught could he see there but the stars, yet the moon was setting, and the first stirring of the sun could not be far behind.

"Rise, my brother," Ferdiad murmured, resting his hand on the sleeper's shoulder, "for we join in battle today with our master's kin and rival." But there was no movement, beside him; his brother slept still, as if he had drunk too deeply of the mead their master poured for them the night before. "Rise," Ferdiad bade him, "for I shall slay a hundred of Aife's warriors this day, and shame thee back to Ulster if thou sleepest here still."

At that his brother stirred, turned to him and opened his shining eyes: "If thou wouldst slay a hundred, then Cu Chulainn shall slay two hundred, and Aife's forces break like a wave against the black walls of Dun Scaith."

Ferdiad smiled. "Shall I contend with thee, then, for the champion's portion? We are well-matched in feats and valor, and strength of arm."

"Indeed," Cu Chulainn answered, "there is but one feat known to me which is not also thine."

"For that," Ferdiad said, "there is but one spear like to the Gae Bulg, and thou art not quick to use it."

Cu Chulainn cast aside his furs, and sat up, fair limbs bare to the chill air. "I swear to thee I will not throw the lightning-spear today. Thus are we matched, my brother, and thus shall the greatest claim the prize."

"Thy words are fair as thy countenance," said Ferdiad. So lovely indeed was Cu Chulainn that all the women of Dun Scaith, from the scullery-maids to Scathach herself, would welcome him to lie with them, and thus did Ferdiad's praise make him smile.

"And thy tongue as nimble as thy blade," Cu Chulainn said, offering his brother a right courtly bow. "I would go ready into battle. Wilt thou aid me?"

Ferdiad offered his hand, to help Cu Chulainn rise. "In all things, brother, for as long as I draw breath."

They rose together then, and stoked the fire to new dancing life, and Ferdiad took up the woad to paint the fair skin of his brother. Right deftly did his fingers move, for Cu Chulainn's comely shape was near as familiar as his own, and lovely as a maiden's: his cheeks still beardless, his voice clear and bright.

"Wilt thou wager with me, on this battle?" Ferdiad asked, as he set the paints aside. "Not only for the champion's portion, but for the other's favor?"

"The other's favor?" his brother replied. "What favor wouldst thou ask of me, that is not already thine?"

"Should I win the right to ask it, I shall tell thee," Ferdiad promised. "When thou art honor-bound not to refuse."

Cu Chulainn laughed, and took the paints to mark his brother's skin. "I will not stay my blade to learn thy mind, my brother."

Ferdiad bowed his head, offering his flesh to Cu Chulainn's hands. "Then I shall best thee plain," he swore, "before this battle's done."



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[info]sister_coyote
2007-09-02 03:54 pm UTC (link)
Oh, *prrrr*. I could just roll around in the language. and poor Ferdiad! ♥

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[info]laylah
2007-09-03 12:41 am UTC (link)
...I know. I felt so bad about the ending. The poor boy! All he wants is some hot brothercest action what everyone in Ulster wants, really, but noooo, instead the favor -- such as it is in the circumstances -- goes to Aife. ^^;;

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[info]puella_nerdii
2007-09-02 04:26 pm UTC (link)
Holy shit, Ulster Cycle fic!

And consider my language-kink buttons mashed, and mashed hard. This kind of formal diction can easily sound stilted, but it's just downright beautiful in your hands.

Reposted because I used the wrong icon and I am obsessive like that.

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[info]laylah
2007-09-03 12:49 am UTC (link)
Thank you!
I really think one of the reasons I don't write this stuff more often is that the language really is tricky to manage, and I struggle with the rhythms a lot. (For some reason FFXII doesn't trip that button for me, but this does. I suspect I'd have this problem writing Venat, though.)

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[info]lassarina
2007-09-02 04:31 pm UTC (link)
eeeeee. I love the language in this, and the way they compete with each other, and yes. Prrrrrrr. *rolls in it*

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[info]laylah
2007-09-03 12:49 am UTC (link)
Thank you! The idiom of boasting and competition seemed to be so central to a lot of the tales -- modesty is kind of a completely unknown virtue for a heroic-age Irish warrior. ^_^

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[info]sheffiesharpe
2007-09-02 05:14 pm UTC (link)
I like so very much.

Fraternal warrior bonds go.

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[info]laylah
2007-09-03 12:50 am UTC (link)
^___^ Thank you! I think every time I touch this canon, that's what it's really about. mmmm.

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[info]snipervalentine
2007-09-02 05:27 pm UTC (link)
I think I just swooned.

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[info]laylah
2007-09-03 12:51 am UTC (link)
*prr* Thank you!

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[info]ex_solo620
2007-09-02 07:25 pm UTC (link)
Wow, Ulster Cycle fic! You have no idea how long I've been waiting for that. Thank you!

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[info]laylah
2007-09-03 12:54 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I always wish I had the stamina for it more often. (And I need to remember to see if I can get it on the list of Yuletide fandoms this year!) I've written a little of it before, back when I was on LJ, and [info]sister_coyote has some on her LJ, too -- try Blood, Fire, Shadow, which is utterly beautiful Scathach/Cu Chulainn near the end of his training. mmmm.

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[info]ex_sugared353
2007-09-03 02:45 am UTC (link)
Oh god, that's beautiful.

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[info]laylah
2007-09-03 03:25 am UTC (link)
^_^ Thank you!

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