It was well worth the few minutes wait. *huge smile*
I don't know what's more frightening: that a) somebody requested it, b) you actually wrote it, or c) I found it disturbingly erotic.
Of course I'm visualizing Johnny Depp's Ichabod, so I suppose that has something to do with it all around, yes? *grins*
I've got to tell you: I think this is a fantastic piece of work. I love your fluid style with sudden emphatical, staccato bridges, and I swear I get a hard-on when I read fic where the writer has such a firm grasp on the fine art of proper punctuation use. Bravo, bravo, bravo! *applauds*
Two little oopsies I noticed: 1) Without effort, the Horseman held him place. I think you wanted "held him in place." 2) found himself staring at the decapitated body of the matistrate. magistrate