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guiltyred ([info]guiltyred) wrote in [info]kinkfest,
@ 2007-09-13 17:38:00

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Entry tags:a: guiltyred, f: final fantasy vii, p: rude/tifa, september 13

FFVII (Rude/Tifa)

Title: Can’t Do Better Than This

Author: GuiltyRed

Rating: R

Warnings: masturbation (f)

Word count: 394

Summary: Rude take a turn at spying on a suspected member of Avalanche and gets more than he bargained for.

Prompt: September 13 – #9. Final Fantasy VII, Rude/Tifa: Masturbation (as performance) – "You think you could do better than this?"

 

 

 

In the lenses of his high-powered binoculars, the suspected terrorist looked like a perfect, tiny doll. Lean muscles rippled beneath the curves as she pulled her shirt off and reached for a towel to mop away the sweat from her workout.

 

Rude fingered the knot of his tie, his throat tightening as he watched. She moved like she didn’t care that anyone could be watching her; he found that strangely exciting in spite of the fact that he could be ordered to kill her any day now. In fact, that may have added to the spice.

 

She bent over to strip off her shoes and shorts, and when she stood upright again she was looking right at him.

 

Rude knew there was no way she could have seen him; nevertheless, he felt his pulse race at the imagined eye contact.

 

The girl lay back on her bed, where he could just barely see her. One hand drifted down between her long legs and began to move slowly, rhythmically, as if putting on a show just for him.

 

Rude swallowed painfully and loosened his tie another fraction. He debated calling an end to the day’s surveillance, but that wasn’t his decision to make, and he dreaded trying to explain to Tseng why, exactly, he thought it was time to pull the plug. “But sir, the young lady was masturbating” just didn’t sound like a strong enough reason.

 

Besides, he really wanted to keep watching.

 

Her hand moved faster, her face taking on the slack-mouthed look of someone on the brink and stuck there. Her hips bucked upward, giving him a clear view of her fingers and the moistness around them, and he imagined he could hear her cry out as she began to climax. She kept her hand moving, fingers dancing across her clit as she came hard. Her entire body convulsed, bringing head and shoulders up off the mattress and imprinting her expression in Rude’s memory forever.

 

“Yo, partner. You ready?”

 

Rude jerked guiltily, almost dropping the binoculars. “Reno!” Then he remembered why he was there and muttered, “What’s the word?”

 

“Not today.”

 

Rude hid his relief as he packed away the binoculars and neatened his necktie. “Dinner?”

 

“After this boring-ass stakeout, I know just what you need, yo!” Reno announced happily. “There’s this place where the girls are so hot – what’s so funny?”



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[info]snipervalentine
2007-09-13 10:30 pm UTC (link)
*stands and applauds*

You know, I'm not usually a huge fan of het stuff, and Rude is definitely not my own personal fantasy Y-chromosome, but...bloody hell, there's something about Tifa and Rude that just gets to me. I'm not sure why, and I'm not entirely certain I want to spoil it by analyzing.

Another great piece. I swear, I could read your shit all day and never get tired of it.

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[info]guiltyred
2007-09-13 11:53 pm UTC (link)
*grins* Thankee kindly!

You know, I'm not usually a huge fan of het stuff...

Would you believe this was my first time writing either het or a girl j-o moment? I'm glad it turned out! ^___^

but...bloody hell, there's something about Tifa and Rude that just gets to me. I'm not sure why, and I'm not entirely certain I want to spoil it by analyzing.

Oh, I totally know! The only het pairings I tend to read are Tifa/Rude or Tifa/Loz. I normally picture the guys with other guys, but Tifa makes for a pleasant change of scenery.

Another great piece. I swear, I could read your shit all day and never get tired of it.

*big sticky grin* You don't happen to be a Weiss Kreuz fan too, do you? 'Cuz if you are, I can hook you up with fics o'mine that'll drain years from your life fill your days with rainbows turn you into an obsessive stalker. ~_^

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[info]snipervalentine
2007-09-14 02:06 am UTC (link)
I'm afraid I wouldn't know Weiss Kreuz if I fell over it. But I'm totally willing to learn.

FF7 is only the second fandom I've written in, the first being many, many years writing some lovely Obi-Wan/padawan Anakin porn. Dropped that like a hot potato when I discovered FF7. So many lovely characters, so many stories to tell, so many gaps in canon to fill in. *sighs* Other than that, the only fandom that I'm writing in is "Pet Shop of Horrors" - though I haven't gotten to the point with that yet where I'm willing to share. But Cound D makes me batshit insane with the pretty, and the long painted nails, and the high tea, so it won't be long, I'm sure.

So anyway, point me to your WK fics, and I'll read anyway. *smiles*

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[info]yohjideranged
2007-09-15 08:59 pm UTC (link)
The thing about Weiss Kreuz is that you have to get over the animation of the thing and concentrate on all the plotholes and canon gaps. I have found fiction that makes the lack of wonderful animation so much better to stomach.

But please, continue to write for FF& - I wouldn't dream of tearing you away! ^_^

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[info]guiltyred
2007-10-16 04:28 pm UTC (link)
Sorry for the delay, me life be crazy o' late. ^_^;

so many gaps in canon to fill in

That's my thing with WK fic -- the canon, she flails. The plot has more holes than a Flint side-street. And Pet Shop is love! I'm collecting the manga -- much darker than the anime. (Favorite story so far is Dreizehn, I think it's from the first book.)

And by all means, help yourself to readables here: http://www.insanejournal.com/tools/memories.bml?user=guiltyred_fics Some are quite long and still work-in-progress, but I'm told they're worth the read. ^____^

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[info]stellar_maiden
2007-09-14 02:44 am UTC (link)
Requester here~ ^_^ I like what you did with my prompt! (this was one of my favorites).

I'm new to springkink/kinkfest/whatev, and this is my very first filled prompt, so thaaaaank you for doing it so well. I <3 your turks writing, and squeed out loud when I saw that you claimed this. For realz.

Anyway, this was a lot of fun to read, if a different direction than I originally intended. But, hey, totally not complaining. I love Reno's lat line, 'twas wonderful. ^^

~Kira

(Alas for lack of Tifa/Rude icon...so you get World of Warcraft's Murky instead!)

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[info]guiltyred
2007-09-19 08:44 pm UTC (link)
Wow, thanks! I like to know I've made a requester happy. ^_____^ And, I was your first, too! Cool!

Feel free to stalk friend me and my fics journal ([info]guiltyred_fics -- much mayhem over there in several fandoms. ^___^

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[info]ladyofshadow
2007-09-14 02:38 pm UTC (link)
LOL!!! Right, boring-ass stakeout, that's what Rude will keep telling Reno. *chuckles*

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[info]guiltyred
2007-09-19 08:45 pm UTC (link)
What Reno doesn't know Rufus and Tseng don't know won't hurt anyone. ~_^

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