awwwwww~ I love Aki there at the end. "BUT IF I DON'T LAY ON YOUR ARM, HOW CAN I MAKE SURE YOU DON'T RUN AWAY? D:" Aki very sneaky, yes <3
typos? "his shirt twisted to bear most of a collarbone" bare? "Come on, I better things to do." "you sure as hell be doing the work" both of these missing a word somewhere? "Shinji's hand moves with his for a few more stokes" missing an r