Oh how I adore that pair! I adore Yozak! ANd even if I like slashing hi with COnrad, I can't decide whichone I love more: COnzak or Gwenzak. It probably varies. Right now I adore Gwenzak more.
Anways the fanfic is well written, even if the gaps are a little confusing. But I like the style of your structure. SImple, but awesome. ANd all ofthem are so in character... I liked the morning scene very much. I always try to write something like that but I never succeed and it doesn't sound like I want it to. So I'm always a little jealous when I read such a good scene, but it makes me love them even more! So all in all a wonderfull fic. You could write a sequel...