Aww, I love this story; it's very fun, and you got Cloud's mentality just right. I loved the 'Shiva's tits he had "Fuck"' part. Made me giggle. Mwah! Very good.
Oh, btw, I ADORE your icons of Cloud sort of eating Sephiroth's hair. Do you maybe have the large version that I could take a looksee at?