Intriguingly, this has a texture/rhythm to the dialogue that seems very much in relation to the game. Vossler always speaks great sweeping statements; Basch does on occasion but still has the occasional brevity.
I also think this:
“This is neither a barn nor a storehouse,” Vossler barked at him. “Close them before moths colonize and leave their grubbing spawn to devour tapestries commissioned a dozen generations before the name Solidor was a twitch in the loins of some tradesman on the Valendian steppe.”
sums up everything you've thought your Vossler to be. So completely. :) What an aristocratic arse.
Now I'm REALLY interested to see what you do with Voss/Bal/Basch and dick size. Hmmmmmmmmmmm. Basch having the biggest dick but Vossler not caring, because Balthier's an aristocrat's son, therefore they two trump the one common-born?