Mystery Author, I LOVE this piece! Such gorgeous, atmospheric, desolate writing. Cho's longing and not-quite-resignation are palpable. And very descriptive writing as well; you set an incredibly vivid scene.
Wow, what an unexpected and inspired use of the toy dragon. I love this entire idea, from the title to the chosen prop to the fact that it was Cedric who gave it to her. The way she uses it as a poor substitute for him, the way she can't let him go, is fantastic. I think this might be the first time I've understood and felt real sympathy for Cho.
This is definitely the under-read gem of this fest. ♥