I don't do Dramione. At all. And I certainly don't do het. But you made it so HOT! And wonderfully, incredibly twisted ... Draco's voice was perfect, and of course Harry's obsession with him hasn't waned. Having that single line run over and over in his mind was perfect. And I adored this line: At least he'd lasted longer than Malfoy. *cracks up* Competitive until the end, is that it, Harry?
And the ending. This is about Harry. Harry and Hermione. Yeah, right.