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wanking_mods ([info]wanking_mods) wrote in [info]hp_wankfest,
@ 2008-05-31 12:00:00

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Entry tags:2008 fic

Neville Longbottom in the Gryffindor Dorms with a Viktor Krum Action Figure
Title: Small But Perfectly Formed
Author: [info]j_lunatic
Character: Neville
Location: Hogwarts Dorms (Gryffindor)
Object: Viktor Krum Action Figure
Other Characters: Viktor
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Misuse of another person's property?
Word Count: 635
Disclaimer: I am neither J.K. Rowling (creator of the Potterverse) nor any of the corporations to which she has licensed her creation.

Neville looked up from Magical Water Plants of the Mediterranean. The idea wouldn't go away, and he probably wouldn't have a better opportunity to act on it--Ron and Harry were out of the room doing whatever they did with Hermione, and Seamus and Dean had detention for screwing around in Charms. I won't look in his trunk, but if it's in his desk--it'd be just like whoever took the last quill out of my desk yesterday.

He drew open the desk--yes, there it was. Neville pulled out the Viktor Krum action figure Ron had brought back from the Quidditch World Cup. Upon being exposed to the light, the toy stirred and stretched in Neville's hand.

Neville was envious that his roommates had had the opportunity to go to the Quidditch World Cup that summer. Partly because Neville genuinely enjoyed the sport as a spectator, if not as a participant. But also because the press coverage after the World Cup final--an interview with Viktor Krum on the WWN, Krum's picture on the front page of the Prophet--had given Neville the answer to the questions raised by his fancies and fleeting thoughts during the last couple of years. Those dreams last year about Professor Lupin were not just about gratitude for the extra help with his DADA classes.

Neville sank down onto his bed and drew the curtains. Seamus might have no problems with being caught wanking, but, well. He gazed at the action figure next to him on the pillow--small but perfectly formed; the manufacturers had perfectly captured the hawklike nose and slouching stance. Neville unbuttoned his shirt and unzipped his trousers, realizing he couldn't be blushing any harder if an actual person was watching him.

Once Neville was naked he took his already hard cock into his hand, slicked with a tongueload of spit. As he began to work his hand up and down the shaft he stared at the Krum action figure, fantasizing that a strong, stocky man was pressed up against him and running his hands all over his body.

Oh yes. He knew that his climax would come soon. Following an impulse Neville grabbed the hard toy and rubbed it against his hard cock--and felt it wrap its arms and legs around his organ. Oh shit! He could feel the object writhing and grinding against him. Is it spelled to do that? What if it never lets go? Madam Pomfrey had assured him on more than one occasion--oh, ever so allusively--that she had seen many students with strange and sensitive issues, and would keep them secret as long as there was no threat of harm to themselves or another person--but Neville did not want to present himself in his current condition.

Teenage lust overcame anxiety, and Neville spilled seed on the action figure and the hand trying to remove it. He could not have been more relieved when the toy removed its limbs from around his flesh. He was still gasping and weak-limbed from his orgasm, but immediately started scrambling for his dressing gown, wanting to clean up himself and Ron's toy, wanting to slip it back in Ron's desk before Neville's action could be discovered. Shrugging on the dark-red garment, he hastened to the bathroom.


When a month later the Beauxbatons and Durmstrang contingents arrived at Hogwarts for the Triwizard Tournament, Neville found it not difficult to keep away from the actual Viktor Krum, never getting any closer than the opposite side of the Great Hall. Until the night of the Yule Ball, when Hermione came swanning up in her blue gown....

"Ginny! And Neville, have you met Viktor Kru--oh! Viktor, would you please get two more cups of punch, for Ginny and Neville? Here, I'll take care of that. Scourgify!"



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[info]alwaysasnapefan
2008-05-31 12:19 pm UTC (link)
How sweet! I find it sooo hot that it latched onto his prick like that. Perfect.

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[info]j_lunatic
2008-06-15 07:53 pm UTC (link)
Hot and comic = Neville. Thanks for responding!

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[info]lee_west
2008-05-31 03:48 pm UTC (link)
This is very nice - I'm not a Neville fan, unless it's gen (then I adore him), but I really liked it. I especially liked the way Neville discovered his sexuality, and the reference to his feelings for Remus.

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[info]j_lunatic
2008-06-15 07:52 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I ordinarily don't ship Neville/Remus, but it seemed to fit his sexual development as presented here.

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[info]torino10154
2008-05-31 04:30 pm UTC (link)
Fantastic how the clever little figure latched on for the ride! Everyone had a crush on Viktor that year. I bet all the boys in the dorm knew where Ron kept it. ;) Well done.

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[info]j_lunatic
2008-06-15 07:55 pm UTC (link)
Oh dear. You do realize that means Neville has effectively had sex with everyone else who has had sex with the Krum action figure? And thanks for commenting!

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[info]ratherbrightred
2008-05-31 05:23 pm UTC (link)
aw, action figure!viktor knows exactly what to do! Very sweet! I really like how the action figure starts out on the pillow next to Neville's head. Adorable.

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[info]j_lunatic
2008-06-15 07:56 pm UTC (link)
It seemed to fit my image of Neville--longing for contact, but too timid and polite to force himself on anyone. Thanks for commenting!

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[info]r_grayjoy
2008-05-31 05:48 pm UTC (link)
Major bonus point for the title of this fic. ::chuckle:: Nice use of the action figure; I giggled at Neville's fear that he'd end up having to go to Madam Pomfrey to get it removed! And great ending. ;)

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[info]j_lunatic
2008-06-15 07:57 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for your comment!

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[info]alisanne
2008-05-31 06:13 pm UTC (link)
*giggles*
Now that is what I call an action figure. :)
Always nice to see Neville getting some action. Heh!

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[info]j_lunatic
2008-06-15 07:59 pm UTC (link)
Oh yes, Neville, strange though it may seem now, the day will will come when real live girls (and boys--shame that Rowling forgot to put that it in) will be lining up to offer themselves to you. Thanks for commenting!

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[info]harrysexxxmagic
2008-05-31 07:04 pm UTC (link)
alisanne stole my line. Yes that is an action figure that lives up to it's name.
and felt it wrap its arms and legs around his organ.
FUCK!
LMAO at the last line!
This was hoTTT and seXXXy

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[info]j_lunatic
2008-06-15 08:00 pm UTC (link)
Very true. I don't doubt Neville truly appreciated when he got some action from a real person. Thanks for commenting!

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[info]harrysexxxmagic
2008-06-23 11:23 am UTC (link)
Thanks for sharing and as far as me commenting I know how hard you and EVERY1 else worked. Thanks again for seXXXy Neville. *HUGS*

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[info]hpuckle
2008-05-31 07:09 pm UTC (link)
Hehe, this is brilliant! The thought of the little Krum latching onto his cock was both hilarious and terribly hot!

xxx

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[info]j_lunatic
2008-06-15 07:59 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for commenting!

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[info]kabal42
2008-06-01 08:51 am UTC (link)
That touch of panic that the figure might not let go was truly a strike of inspiration. Who wouldn't feel that way? And the though of going to a nurse like that... yikes!

Great idea for how Neville discovered his sexuality, too. Very enjoyable fic :-D

My bonus points go to the bit of dialogue at the end. That is a perfect example of how much you can say with a few sentences - and even without saying it outright.

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[info]j_lunatic
2008-06-16 07:58 am UTC (link)
Thank you for commenting--who but Neville to find himself in such a predicament?

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[info]sdk
2008-06-01 02:35 pm UTC (link)
Mmmm, nice use of that action figure I have to say. I love that Neville was blushing like a real person was watching him, and I giggled with the figure latched onto his cock and Neville was worried it wouldn't let go. And the illusion to a little school boy crush on Remus! I love that! So cute!

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[info]j_lunatic
2008-06-15 08:02 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I normally don't ship Neville/Remus, but it seemed to chronologically fit Neville's development, as given here.

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[info]sweetmelodykiss
2008-06-03 09:48 am UTC (link)
*giggling madly* Very well done!

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[info]j_lunatic
2008-06-15 08:01 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for commenting!

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(Anonymous)
2008-06-03 02:15 pm UTC (link)
It's real contrast from my fanfic where Neville kicks it around in a fit of jealousy over Hermione

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[info]j_lunatic
2008-06-15 07:50 pm UTC (link)
Interesting...link please?

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[info]eeyore9990
2008-06-03 06:03 pm UTC (link)
Mmmmm, gah, awesome. Neville is always hot, isn't he? *dreamy sigh*

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[info]j_lunatic
2008-06-15 07:51 pm UTC (link)
I picture Neville as being in a sadly prolonged awkward stage at this time, but yeah, he's adorable.

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[info]angela_snape
2008-06-06 07:38 pm UTC (link)
Well done! I love Neville, and you've captured his shyness well here.

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[info]j_lunatic
2008-06-16 07:52 am UTC (link)
Thank you for commenting. One day Neville would grow up into a leader, sought after by men (oh, and by women too)...but that time had not yet come to pass.

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[info]nehalenia
2008-06-13 03:39 pm UTC (link)
LOL! The image of Neville presenting himself to Madame Pomfrey with a tiny Victor Krum wrapped around his cock will not leave my brain now. I loved Neville in this. Great job!

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[info]j_lunatic
2008-06-16 07:50 am UTC (link)
Thank you for commenting! The poor dear has already spent so much time in the infirmary, and for all the things Pomfrey must have seen over the years, surely Neville would be the one to top them.

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[info]ships_harry
2008-06-13 04:51 pm UTC (link)
Ahah, I love that title, and the last line is win :). I wonder if Ron's discovered that extra function of his action figure? Though perhaps not if he was willing to remove an arm. Heh. Unless the arm went missing for reasons other than temper :).

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[info]j_lunatic
2008-06-16 07:49 am UTC (link)
Perhaps Ron saw something that cannot be unseen. Or maybe he was jealous that the action figure didn't have the same response to him? At any rate, thanks for commenting!

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