쉘리 I whip my hair like Bang Bang (sdk) wrote in hp_wankfest,
Wow...what an angsty fic. I felt horrible for Al! His desperation is palpable and painful, and I love your characterization of him, of both him and Scorpius. I don't think I've ever read any next-gen fics where they're this old either--it was very enjoyable, even though I'm still so sad for Al.
And wow...his wank was hot and his fantasies--whew. Very well done!