This will not be coherent, but I will attempt it. Beautiful. While I will admit to enjoying Harry's mostly nude condition, I have to say that this is one of those rare occasions when it would have been just as sexy without it. The enraptured look on Harry's face and Draco ... I have no words for how beautiful this Draco is. Beautiful just doesn't do him justice.
Oh, this makes me wish the fest were over so I could fangirl you properly. :-)