Where to start. First the imagedry is breathtaking. I especially love the skiff. Then my eyes went to the Gryffindor balnket. The background and the little yellow bird watching. This was beautiful and erotic.
Now for the story, again where to start. Hot, Sexy, Erotic. Being a lesbain this really made me HOTTT! Written in First Person really added something to it. James and Severus watching was.. WOW!