*dies laughing* This is one of the funniest fics I've ever read. Sheer laugh out loud humour line after line, fantastic!
Sirius sounded so much like a proper cockney lad and moony trying to get a word in edgeways was fantastic. Loved it being all dialogue too, worked really well.
I tell you what, it also reminded me of those two commedians Smith and Jones, if you know who I mean!!