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springsmutfairy (springsmutfairy) wrote in hp_springsmut,
@ 2008-03-09 16:20:00

Entry tags:

fic, harry/draco/luna, het, slash, threesome

Happy Springsmut, ninnive!
Author: fourth_rose
Recipient: ninnive
Title: To all of us on our way through life (without our noticing for a time)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco/Luna
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: It is four years after the Battle of Hogwarts, and all is not well. Harry Potter, husband, father, and Junior Auror, has everything he ever wanted – which only goes to prove that you should be careful what you wish for.
Warnings: Infidelity, threesome, voyeurism, a hint of bondage. Not epilogue-compliant.
Word Count: ~13,000
Author's Notes: You made me a very happy camper with your requests, ninnive – I did my best to work in as many of them as I could, and I hope you enjoy the result! The title is from J. M. Barrie's "Peter Pan". Many thanks to my wonderful beta!

( To all of us on our way through life (without our noticing for a time) )

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cutecoati
2008-03-25 09:49 pm UTC (link)

*flails*

Wonderful, wonderful story! Not only a lovely plot, but gazillions of little details that make the whole atmosphere ring true, the characters come alive.

Harry and Draco are simply perfect, with all their Issues and problems and doubts and everything ~~that makes you want to bang their heads together~~, but Luna... OMG LUNA!!! She's so incredibly brilliant, so her! *bows to author's genius*

*returns to aaaaaaawing over image of Kreacher watching over sleeping Teddy*

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	fourth_rose 2008-04-05 08:44 am UTC (link)
	Thank you so much, darling! I seem to be unable to write anything that doesn't include Luna lately... cuddles her g Given that you are the Mistress of Kreacher!fic, I figured that this scene might be right up your alley ;)) (Reply to this) (Parent)

snegurochka_lee
2008-04-04 03:10 am UTC (link)

Oh wow, that was fabulous!! I need a minute to recover from that final sex scene, because... a;lsgj. SMOKING HOT, man. SMOKING. I love your creativity with positions, frankly, because the against the wall stuff was brilliant! And the emotion of the H/D at the end, and roughsex!Harry? a;slkgj. Incoherent here, hi. I loved the whole set up, too, with Harry and Luna getting married for Teddy's sake, and Draco shagging both of them. Wooooot! Great story. :)

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fourth_rose
2008-04-05 08:50 am UTC (link)

I'm so happy that you liked it! I had some trouble getting all the necessary backstory in without huge chunks of info dump, so I'm really glad that the set up works for you. I tried to come up with positions that would appeal to Harry even though he's not physically interested in Luna, and since my recipient wanted wall!sex, that was the solution I came up with. Thank you for the lovely rec you wrote for this fic - this is only my second attempt at writing a threesome, and you can't imagine what an ego boost it gave me when you said that there were positions in it you hadn't considered before ;)

*hugs*

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	snegurochka_lee 2008-04-05 12:26 pm UTC (link)
	Aha, yes, I thought this might have been you!! :) (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	fourth_rose 2008-04-05 12:34 pm UTC (link)
	Really? What gave me away? is curious (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	snegurochka_lee 2008-04-05 04:44 pm UTC (link)
	Oh! Um, the Harry/Luna, I think, because I keep meaning to read more of that pairing, and you're someone who I see writing it a fair bit, so it's sort of associated with you in my head. Even though I fail at actually reading as much of it as I'd like. gets easily distracted by Remus slash :) (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	fourth_rose 2008-04-06 02:42 pm UTC (link)
	Ah, I see - I expected that people who read my H/D stuff might recognize me, but since you're not such a Draco fan, I was quite surprised that you'd guessed I wrote this ;) Harry/Luna has indeed become something like my het OTP. I blame Evanna Lynch's brilliant performance ;) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	celandineb 2008-04-05 02:54 am UTC (link)
	Oh, this was just wonderful! I had it open in a tab and half-read when the reveals came up -- is gleeful. Gorgeous job with characterizing them, brilliantly balanced (Teddy's cute without going overboard), and the sex was steamy. My my my... applauds (Reply to this) (Thread)

	fourth_rose 2008-04-05 08:52 am UTC (link)
	Thank you so much, darling! hugs I'm quite wary of kid!fics myself because, like you said, it's so easy to overdo it, so I'm really happy that my take on Teddy works for you :)) (Reply to this) (Parent)