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beholder_mod (beholder_mod) wrote in hp_beholder,
@ 2011-05-13 13:50:00

Entry tags:

beholder_2011, charlie weasley, charlie/millicent, charlie/ofc, fic, het, millicent bulstrode, rating:nc17

FIC: "Big Girls Don't Cry" for odogoddess
Recipient: psyfic
Author: ragdoll
Title: Big Girls Don't Cry
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Charlie Weasley/Millicent Bulstrode, Charlie/OFC, mention of past Millicent/Theodore Nott
Word Count: ~11,000
Warnings/Content Information (Highlight to View): *forced bondage, hurt/comfort, verbal humiliation by OCs, frottage, hand-jobs*.
Summary:When Millicent Bulstrode was found guilty of colluding with known Death Eaters, she was forced to endure two years of indentured servitude at the Romanian Dragon Reserve waiting hand and foot on Charlie Weasley. It doesn't get more draconian than that.
Author's Notes: psyfic, I was elated when I got your assignment and tried to give you as many things that you loved as I could. This was not even close to what I had originally planned on writing for you (or who!) but these two shouted the loudest and made their demands known. I certainly had fun giving in to them. I hope you enjoy it and will forgive me for the lack of Snapeness.

Thanks to R. for all of her support and nurturing, as well as K and S for betaing and cheerleading, and of course bethbethbeth for being so patient and understanding.

"Big Girls Don't Cry"

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ragdoll
2011-05-30 07:38 am UTC (link)

First of all, mere words cannot convey just how happy your comments made me. I was honestly worried about writing for you and the lack of Snapeness, so when I saw this, I practically cried tears of joy and relief. :)

I am beyond thrilled that you liked it so much -- I tried to encorporate as many of your requests as possible in it and clearly that worked. I am also thrilled that you 'got' Millicent and Charlie here and they worked with your views on them too. I was a little trepidatious about using a Weasley as a love interest for her, but since you hadn't said no to him, he was fair game. So even happier that you really liked it.

I wasn't sure about putting in a proper shag -- I might have misunderstood your requests by not including that at all, but within the framework (and really loving your request for people choosing less conventionally forms of sex), it didn't seem right for them to just jump into bed immediately. There was too much baggage on both their parts although obviously, it IS coming in the future ~~and so are they~~. I am glad you didn't feel stinted -- if you did, I would happily include an epilogue of nuclear proportions. LOL

Again, thank you so much for your enthusiastic and detailed comments on the fic. I rarely get such indepth feedback from people I write for so this meant a lot to me. I'm so glad I was able to give you something you really enjoyed. :)

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