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atdelphi (atdelphi) wrote in hp_beholder,
@ 2014-05-06 14:51:00

Entry tags:

beholder 2014, fic, garrick ollivander, garrick ollivander/pomona sprout, het, pomona sprout, rated:pg

FIC: "A Properly Improper Love Affair" for katmarajade
Recipient: katmarajade
Author/Artist: ???
Title: A Properly Improper Love Affair
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: Garrick Ollivander/Pomona Sprout, Neville Longbottom/Viktor Krum (implied).
Word Count: 10,900
Warnings/Content Information (Highlight to View): *Non-linear storytelling, with the time line moving back and forth between past to present*.
Summary: True love never dies, but it may take a decade or two for things to work out.
Author's/Artist's Notes: Many thanks to my pre-readers and to the mod for her patience. I hope you enjoy the story, katmarajade.

A Properly Improper Love Affair

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alisanne
2014-05-22 12:39 am UTC (link)

Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed this! I admit I was worried, since I did try a bit of an experiment with the format. And is it bad that I kinda enjoyed that I brought you to tears? :)

As for the old fashioned feel...I tried hard to capture that, I even listened to old 1930's radio broadcasts to try to get a feel for the peculiarities of language, so I'm pleased if that showed. *g*

Hee! The brand new Leaky Cauldron seemed like a fun idea. :)
And I figured Pomona would be a forward, modern woman, so why not have her make the first move, right? :)

Garrick was fun to research! And for a man who loves wands and wandlore I thought it made sense to have him have more than one wand. *g* Hee! And I think it's lovely that you enjoyed his dueling. ;)
HIs fascination with Vodemort was such an integral part of his personality that it made a great jumping off point for him. Although yes, he clearly doesn't know women at all. *giggles*

Thank you for the lovely reaction! I'm just completely thrilled that you enjoyed it. *beams*

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