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hdcup_mod (hdcup_mod) wrote in hd_worldcup,
@ 2008-04-03 07:56:00

Entry tags:

fic, nc-17, prompt: judgment, round i, team epilogue

Take A Sad Song (And Make It Better) -- Team Epilogue
Title: Take A Sad Song (And Make It Better)
Team: Epilogue
Author: femmequixotic
Prompt: Judgment
Wordcount: 45,425
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: none
Summary: The last thing Harry wants is to lose his kids.
Author's Note: Many thanks to my two wonderful betas for their work. The card interpretation I used may be found here.

Take A Sad Song (And Make It Better)

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inspiredlife
2008-04-06 04:26 am UTC (link)

I was hooked from the very first image of Harry staring at the ceiling with the smoke curling around him. What a fantastic read. I loved how real it was. It was such an interesting story with a wonderful sub-plot. I was completely drawn into the mystery and drama.

What I most loved though was your characterizations. Harry was so real here...trying so hard to be a good father, to find what he needed and trying to move forward after bollixing it all up. Draco was a fascinating bloke...what i would have hoped for canon Draco. And, the kids...Albus touched me, Scorpius intrigued me and James confounded me, half the time I wanted to smack him, the other half I wanted to hug him.

Oh, i could go on and on. Long, plotty, interesting and intense. I loved this story!

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