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hdcup_mod (hdcup_mod) wrote in hd_worldcup,
@ 2008-04-03 07:56:00

Entry tags:

fic, nc-17, prompt: judgment, round i, team epilogue

Take A Sad Song (And Make It Better) -- Team Epilogue
Title: Take A Sad Song (And Make It Better)
Team: Epilogue
Author: femmequixotic
Prompt: Judgment
Wordcount: 45,425
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: none
Summary: The last thing Harry wants is to lose his kids.
Author's Note: Many thanks to my two wonderful betas for their work. The card interpretation I used may be found here.

Take A Sad Song (And Make It Better)

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Is the author/artist true to their team? Yes/No vote ("yes" is worth 2 points, "no" is worth 0)

How well did the author/artist use their Prompt? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)

How much did you like this story/art overall? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)

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gryffindorj
2008-04-29 05:15 pm UTC (link)

Before I ask my question I should really say that I LOVED this story. Maybe the mod can straighten me out here but I was unsure as to this being team Epilogue why Kingsley was not Minister. I was confused for this fic because I thought this team was all canon even epilogue.

This was the best one I have read where I actually thought the characters, outside Draco and Harry, were perfect. I liked Ron well enough but I didn't LOVE Ron which, usually I hate Ron in a fic so that was brilliant because in canon I like him but don't love him. Also you made Ginny's actions real and believable. Yes I thought she was being a bitch sometimes but that is because I love Harry and I want the world to bend to him. I didn't blame her one bit though and if I like her in a fic that is another win. The sex scene was just awesome. It was Draco and Harry being Draco and Harry. Not one more in charge of the other, just when I thought one was the other came surging back. Lastly I loved the struggle of Harry as a father and even Draco as one. How they aren't sure they are doing the right thing but thought they were sometimes. That felt so real and it was very brilliant. I sometimes think fathers are trounced in HP so I like to see them trying their best to be the best. Well done author!

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