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hdcup_mod (hdcup_mod) wrote in hd_worldcup,
@ 2008-04-20 14:33:00

Entry tags:

fic, prompt: the lovers, r, round i, team ewe

Lamp in the Cooling Room - Team EWE
Title: Lamp in the Cooling Room
Team: EWE
Author: sansa1970
Prompt: The Lovers
Wordcount: ˜9000
Rating: R
Warnings: none
Summary: Draco and Harry become snared in a trap, but they're not alone. Love guides our path for reasons we can't always understand.
Author's Note: The Lovers: A card of crossroads, tension, and a decision. Duty or your heart's desire? A test that affects the rest of your life. Endless thanks to my beta readers.

Lamp in the Cooling Room

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Poll #1446
Open to: All, results viewable to: None

1. Is the author/artist true to their team? Yes/No vote ("yes" is worth 2 points, "no" is worth 0)

2. How well did the author/artist use their Prompt? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)

3. How much did you like this story/art overall? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)

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gryffindorj
2008-04-30 09:24 pm UTC (link)

This is not only the best story I have read in the woldcup but the best story I have read in the past I don't know 3 months. That's saying something too because I am already into Snarry_games. At first was unsure about the POV but you did it perfectly. I like seeing Harry and Draco from her eyes and it's just "her" because we don't even know her name. I love that she sees Draco as brave that touched me so much. The sex scene I was a bit nervous about at first because it was being overheard by a child, but then as I kept going it got kind of hot. Then I started crying as she described there kiss and how she didn't know people kissed for that long. I kept crying more till the end of the fic and even now I am still a little *sniff*.

I want so much for this to end happily and for Draco and Harry to escape together. I love an ambiguous ending though and I think maybe for right now or until otherwise I will think of them dieing in one another's arms. SHIT! Now I'm crying again. Ok maybe I'll think them getting out together ending.

Beautiful amazing spectacular job!

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