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hdcup_mod (hdcup_mod) wrote in hd_worldcup,
@ 2008-04-20 14:29:00

Entry tags:

fic, pg-13, prompt: the lovers, round i, team epilogue

The Last Voice - Team Epilogue
Title: The Last Voice
Team: Team Epilogue
Author: malachic
Prompt: The Lovers
Wordcount: About 5,900
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Infidelity, cheating, angst
Summary: Who knew a single letter could change so much?
Author's Note: Hugs to Team Epilogue, especially N and L, without which this fic would be considerably worse. Interpretation of card is literal and tarot.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter, Draco Malfoy and all associated characters from the Harry Potter universe are the property of J.K. Rowling and those to whom she has licensed her creations, including without limitation Bloomsbury Books, Scholastic Books, Raincoat Books, and Warner Bros., Inc. No copyright infringement is intended. The author is making no profit from this story.

The Last Voice

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1. Is the author/artist true to their team? Yes/No vote ("yes" is worth 2 points, "no" is worth 0)

2. How well did the author/artist use their Prompt? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)

3. How much did you like this story/art overall? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)

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ships_harry
2008-05-21 07:31 pm UTC (link)

I'm so glad I gave this a re-read :). The first time, I wasn't quite sure; wasn't quite into it, and decided to wait for a bit before I left a comment. Of course, I forgot to come back, and by the time I did so, I needed to look through again to have any idea what happened :). Second time around, this grabbed me so hard. Not so much the newspaper concept - a nice device, but it didn't seem so important after the initial parts of the story. That structure, though. That was so hooky - it was like having an alternating POV without the horrible jarring that would entail. Harry's letter, fixed in one point of time, and the pieces of story from Draco's POV, moving through the years... awesome story :).

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